The British slang randomly thrown about in the dialogue makes it hard to read and get invested in the story before getting yanked out by more British slang. It feels even more out of place because the captain mentions the temperature in fahrenheit not celsius.
Hi, thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I admit some slang is difficult to read. These are my early ideas, and I'm gradually reducing the proportion now. As for Fahrenheit, Heliorise is actually a fictional American-style city. MC and Brian came here as foreigners.
I was wondering, will there be an Android version in the future, and will Chinese language support be added? This is a game with great potential, and Chinese players would love it for sure!:)
Hi, thanks for telling me this, but the game size is larger than its maximum size, so I had to use a third-party link. It said something about applying for larger size limitations, I'll look into it.
Dear author, I want to ask if the choice of four different main lines will lead to the loss of some girls' paths or cg. I don't want to miss every one of them
You won't close any girl's path unless you intend to do so (like choose 'leave' while the other option is 'stay'). But different paths do lead to different cg. Rather than losing it, you just get to see another one.
First of all, if you want to make a harem game, don't make people choose between LIs. It's fine (and even good) to be able to choose whether you're interested in each LI individually, but making people choose between having a scene with one LI or another is a terrible idea.
That said, I hope we can avoid the relationship (and sex scenes) with the girl at the beginning (the one who looks like a devil).
If you had split the current content between a 0.1 and 0.2 updates, I would have still praised you. For what's called a "prologue", it has a substantial amount of content! The way of speaking MC and his best friend have is for sure idiosyncratic and I found it odd at first, but soon I came to love it, it really sets this game and those characters apart, well done with that bold decision! Love the amount of choices too, as well as the stats, managing them never feels overwhelming. I look forward to future updates/chapters for sure, great first release!
EDIT: Ups, forgot to say this, but if you can please add alternative download links ("mirrors") for your game. Ideally it could be downloaded natively from Itch, but if not, Google Drive works too!
The strict rules are Patreon, Subscribe Star and some other pledge sites allows it, Sure there are ways around these rules but I would not talk about it too much and just do the way around it on the sly, Patches, different versions, having a second script that when a name is used it overwrites the Patreon safe one and many others have happened in the past, the most common is the "who is this person to you, what do they call you" at the start of the game but it makes some lines look out of place at times. Or you can go the extra safe path and make it that she was not the MCs sister at all yet the MC treats her like a sister still. This path will upset fans on some other sites but it allows you to bypass Patreon
Yeah, sad to see about sister. Hopefully you find a way, like a unofficial patch(many do this), or something else. I don't want her removed as sis, cause I do love that kink in avns. So hopefully you find a way, and until you figure out what you want, she seems like a bit of slow burn, so you could probably progress the relationship in some way, without anything actually happening right now
This does not tell me whether there is or isn't incest in this game. Please be clear. Is there incest in this game, yes or no and if there isn't, is it the kind where it's barely hidden behind "sister" being find/replaced with "roommate". I'm not looking to play incest games.
Honestly really solid. Animations are great. I am glad there is femdom, excited for that. Story very interesting.
My one issue, I do wish the hair was a bit different color wise. It looks off to me, it looks, brown, blonde, and yellow all in one and at different times. Just feels like its not consistent at times. Just wished it was a darker color or something, like darker light brown, or something and more consistent. I know this is probably just me, but still, a chance for change?
I am interested in playing more, but the hair is giving me pause, we shall see, sadge, but either way keep up the good work.
Yeah, there's actually a bug with MC's hair color, it needs a scene reload to show properly, but I didn't notice it until the very end. I'll make sure it stays a dark blonde/brown in the future.
That's just how the plot goes. They are there to tell you what's going on and leave a cliffhanger. In the future, you get to choose whether you wanna play along or not
What I've seen of the beginning of the game and the end of the current version has only made me hate Eiseth. Besides, I don't like either femdom or maledom, so switching one for the other isn't something I'm keen on.
This one has potential, i see some inspiration to other popular VN's, and the focus on story over lewd scenes is good, i'm looking forward to reading more!
This is a nice start to both a good storyline, character building and amazing girls with many possible H scenes and types of scenes, looking forward to many aspects of this one.
A +1 for allowing both types of scenes in the replay gallery, not all games that have different scenes don't always do this so that is a welcoming approach for people that like to play a certain style but want to still view what would happen if you picked the other option.
I just played the prologue and good job cause it's pretty good. I just kinda hoped you kept the mc previous hair. I just would like to ask, is NTR(I hope not) one of your plans?
Ohhh a new one that has potential ok fam. I might try and see and of course I'm already gonna rate it my highest cause I don't go back to those. I am hoping and praying you get to finish this masterpiece of yours JBR fam so it doesn't get abandoned. Like some of the stuff I've played.
Nah, nothing really—I'm just asking for myself. I don't play those big cock games, and honestly, I'm tired of dealing with big cocks in every game. It's exhausting. Anyway, best of luck in the end.
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The British slang randomly thrown about in the dialogue makes it hard to read and get invested in the story before getting yanked out by more British slang. It feels even more out of place because the captain mentions the temperature in fahrenheit not celsius.
Hi, thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I admit some slang is difficult to read. These are my early ideas, and I'm gradually reducing the proportion now. As for Fahrenheit, Heliorise is actually a fictional American-style city. MC and Brian came here as foreigners.
I was wondering, will there be an Android version in the future, and will Chinese language support be added? This is a game with great potential, and Chinese players would love it for sure!:)
There's a translation working in progress by one of the community members. It will come out along with episode one.
Just letting you know it is not availible to those who use the Itch app on PC , it has the hosted on a third party website thing.
Hi, thanks for telling me this, but the game size is larger than its maximum size, so I had to use a third-party link. It said something about applying for larger size limitations, I'll look into it.
I was wondering if there's gonna be a android in the future?
Not in the near future sorry, cuz I don't have the code knowledge for that. But I'll try to learn
Dear author, I want to ask if the choice of four different main lines will lead to the loss of some girls' paths or cg. I don't want to miss every one of them
You won't close any girl's path unless you intend to do so (like choose 'leave' while the other option is 'stay'). But different paths do lead to different cg. Rather than losing it, you just get to see another one.
I see. Thank you for your reply. I look forward to updating next time!
First of all, if you want to make a harem game, don't make people choose between LIs. It's fine (and even good) to be able to choose whether you're interested in each LI individually, but making people choose between having a scene with one LI or another is a terrible idea.
That said, I hope we can avoid the relationship (and sex scenes) with the girl at the beginning (the one who looks like a devil).
If you had split the current content between a 0.1 and 0.2 updates, I would have still praised you. For what's called a "prologue", it has a substantial amount of content! The way of speaking MC and his best friend have is for sure idiosyncratic and I found it odd at first, but soon I came to love it, it really sets this game and those characters apart, well done with that bold decision! Love the amount of choices too, as well as the stats, managing them never feels overwhelming. I look forward to future updates/chapters for sure, great first release!
EDIT: Ups, forgot to say this, but if you can please add alternative download links ("mirrors") for your game. Ideally it could be downloaded natively from Itch, but if not, Google Drive works too!
What is the currently planned/implemented list of tags? The description mentions a sister. Is there incest in this game?
Tags implemented: tit job, blow job, male domination, female domination, dildo, missionary, cow girl
Planned: rope, corruption, romance, foot job, creampie, threesome, anal etc. Nothing too extreme.
The strict rules are Patreon, Subscribe Star and some other pledge sites allows it, Sure there are ways around these rules but I would not talk about it too much and just do the way around it on the sly, Patches, different versions, having a second script that when a name is used it overwrites the Patreon safe one and many others have happened in the past, the most common is the "who is this person to you, what do they call you" at the start of the game but it makes some lines look out of place at times.
Or you can go the extra safe path and make it that she was not the MCs sister at all yet the MC treats her like a sister still. This path will upset fans on some other sites but it allows you to bypass Patreon
I second everything Fisty123 has said they're spot on!
Yeah, sad to see about sister. Hopefully you find a way, like a unofficial patch(many do this), or something else. I don't want her removed as sis, cause I do love that kink in avns. So hopefully you find a way, and until you figure out what you want, she seems like a bit of slow burn, so you could probably progress the relationship in some way, without anything actually happening right now
This does not tell me whether there is or isn't incest in this game. Please be clear. Is there incest in this game, yes or no and if there isn't, is it the kind where it's barely hidden behind "sister" being find/replaced with "roommate". I'm not looking to play incest games.
Honestly really solid. Animations are great. I am glad there is femdom, excited for that. Story very interesting.
My one issue, I do wish the hair was a bit different color wise. It looks off to me, it looks, brown, blonde, and yellow all in one and at different times. Just feels like its not consistent at times. Just wished it was a darker color or something, like darker light brown, or something and more consistent. I know this is probably just me, but still, a chance for change?
I am interested in playing more, but the hair is giving me pause, we shall see, sadge, but either way keep up the good work.
Yeah, there's actually a bug with MC's hair color, it needs a scene reload to show properly, but I didn't notice it until the very end. I'll make sure it stays a dark blonde/brown in the future.
Looks interesting. Will follow and try it out once it is a little further into development.
Not gonna lie first your store page got me for playing it
every other AVNs I see have shit store page which makes a bad first impression. But yours my guy nailed it.
and lastly I got to know this game (which has so much potential btw) from Niichan's discord server(developer of Sicae and MBML) so thanks to him too
anyways keep up your work and when I'm able to afford I will surely support this project have a nice day dude :D
Thanks mate! I never thought you could see my game from Niichan. I also played his games so really happy to know
well its cause of your game if its worth people will recommend and that's exactly what happened
and you got yourself a fan who will do the same haha
how femdom heavy is the game?
Can we avoid it completely?
Yes, you can. It's completely up to you
so whats up with the start and the end of the episode if it's avoidable?
That's just how the plot goes. They are there to tell you what's going on and leave a cliffhanger. In the future, you get to choose whether you wanna play along or not
What I've seen of the beginning of the game and the end of the current version has only made me hate Eiseth. Besides, I don't like either femdom or maledom, so switching one for the other isn't something I'm keen on.
This one has potential, i see some inspiration to other popular VN's, and the focus on story over lewd scenes is good, i'm looking forward to reading more!
Will there be an Android version?
Maybe in the future, I‘ll look into it when I have time.
Thanks I'll be waiting for it
This is a nice start to both a good storyline, character building and amazing girls with many possible H scenes and types of scenes, looking forward to many aspects of this one.
A +1 for allowing both types of scenes in the replay gallery, not all games that have different scenes don't always do this so that is a welcoming approach for people that like to play a certain style but want to still view what would happen if you picked the other option.
I just played the prologue and good job cause it's pretty good. I just kinda hoped you kept the mc previous hair. I just would like to ask, is NTR(I hope not) one of your plans?
No, no NTR is planned.
You're the first one like that hair, but sadly, Brian tricked MC to change it
I'm glad. I'll support your game. Can't wait for the next update
Ohhh a new one that has potential ok fam. I might try and see and of course I'm already gonna rate it my highest cause I don't go back to those. I am hoping and praying you get to finish this masterpiece of yours JBR fam so it doesn't get abandoned. Like some of the stuff I've played.
Thanks mate. I won't abandon this till my PC explodes
Good to hear fam :D
can you add small penis male mc?
Not planned, and I don't really get why
Nah, nothing really—I'm just asking for myself. I don't play those big cock games, and honestly, I'm tired of dealing with big cocks in every game. It's exhausting. Anyway, best of luck in the end.
Wow, that's a rather scarce perspective... I just used the default size actually. Good luck to you finding the game you like!
(Damn, that huge size is considered the default one? No wonder so many games have hung MC's if it's the default size setting...)